Change your medium!
Erm, interesting premise for a song, if I was to step back and ask myself if it's iPod friendly, I'd say no. But maybe, make a youtube video, get it viral, and create the Poop On My Dick meme ;P It could really take off, but as it is, as a fully fledged song, I probably wouldn't listen to it.
Edgy!
I'd have to hear the original song first, to understand how much you've actually changed it, but I trust you have. As it sounds, it's pretty sweet, cut up nicely, and the texture's nicely thick. Although some of the cutting is a little too edgy at points, good job!
Cheers man, first song i actually used on my new program. Was just a tester i suppose. Cheers for the review
Engaging
Due to the fact it's driven by a simple beat and bass hook, I'd call it a dance track (not sure if that's a genre on Newgrounds) and a good dance track at that! Good variation, it doesn't get dull quickly like other dance tracks bordering on minimalist, and excellent job!
Cheery
Quite a full sound for one instrument. Although there is variation, for me there isn't enough, I want to hear more! Maybe some melodies as well. Extremely 'major' and so very cheery, brightened my day a little if I'm honest.
thanks I'll try to improve it. Im glad it brightened your day.
Smooth
Flicking through new audio entries, this is the first thing that I actually liked. Anything other than another ambient dance track is good for me. Still lacks texture, and goes a bit random at points, otherwise good.
i'm glad you liked it (must have not liked it that much to give it a 5 though :/). as far as texturing goes i wanted it to have that 4 person band feel rather than something that is overly produced
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Poop On My Dick